I really liked some of the ideas that were recommended in the comments. Someone stated that it could also be used by students that have animal related majors. I really didn't think of that at the time. I also agree that I should have had better lighting in the last video. Also there was a lot of positive feedback on the visuals.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
I tried changing the lighting, however I can't seem to make it better, maybe it's my camera. However, I did add professional visuals based on the positive feedback last time and I went a little bit more in depth on how I am going to fund my venture.
Video
The video can be found here
https://youtu.be/MXTQ_8CHcM0
Toni,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I just want to say that your video really shows the depth and knowledge that you possess in regards to your service. I think you did a great job at tweaking this presentation to adjust to the feedback of others. I think you have a solid idea and work ethic here and you will go far. Check out my blog here!http://ethan2you.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Toni,
ReplyDeleteSo I liked your video since you actually put the effort and made a power point to display your business idea! Also one tip in the future when you are creating your post instead of putting a youtube link you can actually click the little video picture to embedded a youtube video which looks really cool! Feel free to check out how I have embedded them at my blog - http://derekdonahueentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/
Hi there Toni!
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to say great job! I really like this idea, especially since I was thinking about getting a dog and was concerned about the time I would spend away from my pet while being in class. I definitely see the potential in this. I like how you included graphics, dressed well, and used body language to engage your audience. Great job!
http://www.finityphotos.com/blog/2016/3/16/elevator-pitch-no3